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It should have more reverb and instruments, especially percussion. It sounds too empty and it is too short.. it does not sound bad but i think it has a lot more potential

Georgisen responds:

Thank you LaserVision I am working on a new one and promise will focus on more percussion.

Wow I cannot believe you made this without having played an instrument prior to this.. It does sound very dynamic. The mixing sounds somewhat horrible though; as by now you probably have much more experience

BlastBeats responds:

When I made this song I had no idea what mixing was. I layered so many instruments that even a pro wouldn't manage to mix them correctly. Some months later, after I learned how to mix, I tried to "fix" this song. Consequently it lost its dynamicness, power and flow (although the mix that time wasn't too bad), so I didn't upload a better mix. The flaws in the mixing and mastering process made the song sound cool. At the moment I try to make a well mixed song sound as dynamic as this one, for I believe that my other songs lost dynamicness because of my mixing. The irony...

As a bass player I really love that bass tune! Good job with the sound mixing! I wouldn't change much about the track except add some clean vocals for it :P, it would sound less boring around the 1 minute mark. The riff at 3:34 - 4:02 though.. easily the best part!!

LexRodent responds:

Thanks for listening and reviewing.
This track (and the others I'm rebuilding) used to have vocals, but all the voice recordings went lost when my old PC fried on a short circuit.

The vocals could be improved slightly, as you admitted yourself. You did a great job with the lyrics, summarising the dark shit of the american society. Respect bro!

hellomynameisjunior responds:

Thanks man! I plan on recording the vocals again this weekend. Then spend a day mixing them a bit. I'm still a novice at audio production, so my emphasis recording this time is really going to be on strengthening my flow.

I dig it!! Simplistic but amazing. ;)

There we go! Sounds much better now ;) 5/5!!

Damn.. I wish I could say that I made this. The mastering was spot on too!

Felocai responds:

Thats so nice, thanks!

You are already aware of the mastering so I'll skip that part :P Love the part around 2 minutes, but after that I feel that the song ends a bit abruptly, it sounds unfinished in a way. I would add at least one extra minute. The beginning should have had a slower and longer build to it. The drums would have sounded perfect to me if the hi-hat was just a little bit more quiet. I've already looped about 4 times, just throwing out some constructive criticism to make a good song even better :d

Drewpy responds:

I did indeed rush the ending of this song. I was getting bored with it (that should have been a red flag) and wanted a finished product as fast as possible. But I've learned my lesson!! Thanks for the criticism, it really helps!!!

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