Awesome!! Yeah I wish there was more to it than than, but it does what it's meant to. xD

Hahahaha what the actual fuck? So damn funny (and hot!). Definitely getting YT red now (of course). Perfect execution! xD

Disturbing with headphones. Needs more saturation; it was hard on the eyes. Also needs shadows and objects in the scene. The drawing aren't the best as you admitted. Great work anyways.

Those eyes haunt me in my sleep!! Very well made. Love the pixel graphics. There seems to be a bug where you can't access the 2nd night unless you go to the menu first.

The graphics are fairly good looking. Needs more colors, even if with high transparency. Its hard to tell whats going on on the screen. There is no explanation of how the game mechanics work either. The silence during gameplay is not that pleasant, some chill music in the background would work. Gameplay-wise its okay; nothing spectacular. But at least it functions properly i guess.

Just when I needed it. A great way to unleash your rage after a bad day. Love how op your character gets after you purchase the items. It's fairly simple though and there should have been more items :/

Prepare to get roasted muahahahahahha just kidding.

Starts off awesome. Love the build-up. Could have used a stronger snare however.

At 0:30 shit gets real. The voices are a great addition. It was interesting to hear them together with the beat and nothing else.

From 0:57 until 1:24 it kinda ruined it for me, doesn't seem to fit together with the rest of the song at all. The synth and the chords sound too mellow and off.

At 1:38, same as I said earlier, needs a stronger snare.

At 2:19 it's back to business, similar to 0:30. I consider these parts, and 1:52, to be the best parts of the song. They are the most catchy, there is a perfect balance between wobbly sounds and voices together with the beat.

Conclusion:
- Catchy as ¤&#()/)!#"!!!!!!
- Snare is too weak, especially at the build-up parts

So yeah you got roasted I guess :P

Starts off good but is quickly ruined by whatever the thing at 0:07 is supposed to be. The main melody seems to be off key at times. One minute in it gets much better though. I really liked the wobbly sounds! Great choice of instruments for the most part!

There is some room for improvement in the mastering though. One clear example is at 2:14. The drums are ear-piercing, think it would have sounded cooler if you had added some FX together with some white noise.
Or how about the transition at 1:30? The melody goes from being very separated to centered immediately. The volume throughout the song is fine however.

Conclusion:
- Catchy tune
- Needs better mastering

Basically not amazing but not terrible either. Better than average 3 stars though. Keep it up!

First of all, try to be a little more positive. If you dislike your music so much then maybe you shouldn't be a composer yet. More often than not, shown negativity tends to alienate other users. I'm not saying that you can't be pessimistic about your music because that would make me hypocritical, but try to limit it somewhat. Anyway,

I think you should have given the thunder a little more time to fade out before introducing the bell already at 0:02. Perhaps 8-10 more seconds? Also I think the pace is going forward at a velocity that is too fast.
The "xylophone sound" sounds more like a high pitched kick and there's not much melody to be heard from it. The synth that starts to fade in at 0:17 hurts my ears and is just annoying.
I like the part at 0:51-1:25 though, because it seems like you were taking the time needed to set the mood for the song. After that the song repeats it seems.

Conclusion:
- Too short, should be at least 1 minute longer, preferably even more
- Very repetitive, nothing stands out
- Tempo is too fast
- 0:51-1:25 is the best part, even though it's used earlier in the song
- Good use of audio samples

I apologise for coming off as rude, I understand that FL studio can be hard to work with since I'm new to the program myself. But I hope that I've helped in some way at least.

I get a cool vibe from this picture. This is a very beautiful interpretation. I love the sharp contrast between the dark forest and the white snow. I also like how the light of the sun fades together with the mist, which I just noticed was created with the opposite color of yellow. In my opinion a path of flowers would give the scene more color, though the lack of colors might add to the sense of "coolness". I would guess that it was an intention.

Beautiful.

Truly beautiful. Cool concept and backstory. Love the color cyan!!