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[Catalyst]

You are already aware of the mastering so I'll skip that part :P Love the part around 2 minutes, but after that I feel that the song ends a bit abruptly, it sounds unfinished in a way. I would add at least one extra minute. The beginning should have had a slower and longer build to it. The drums would have sounded perfect to me if the hi-hat was just a little bit more quiet. I've already looped about 4 times, just throwing out some constructive criticism to make a good song even better :d

Drewpy responds:

I did indeed rush the ending of this song. I was getting bored with it (that should have been a red flag) and wanted a finished product as fast as possible. But I've learned my lesson!! Thanks for the criticism, it really helps!!!

[Nebulae]

Has a very catchy beat to it and yes, I do agree that the mastering could need some adjustments. That is pretty much the only thing that gets me.

Drewpy responds:

Thanks for the review!! Yeah, I'm going to spend the next few months working on mastering and synthesis as well. I'm super happy that you liked the track though!! Reading stuff like this puts me in a good mood for the day, so thanks!

[Fast Food Lounge [WIP]]

Hmmm to me it sounds like a mix between RnB and hiphop but I could be very wrong. I think that you should add a part without the drums but with a similar melody-pattern at around 2 minutes. Overall very fitting for some kind of fast food game.

BananaBatN responds:

Well, I thought of everything but RnB and Hip-Hop :D
Thanks for the idea to remove the drums, this made me experimenting with different styles/genres of drums and I realized that it really could be anything, I mean if I just change the drums alone, it would change the genre completely, especially if I change the tempo too, the original drums that you can hear in this is just a "fast food" drum, I just wanted to put something in because I needed drums, so that could change I guess

Thanks for the idea! :)

[(SORTA COMPLETE) TEMERARUS CAELUM - Noedig]

Wow, I've never heard anything similar. Honestly, the sound-pollution does make the song more ambient to me. It sounds fitting for the most part except the piano-part at around 3 minutes where I think was a little bit too much.

Syzion responds:

Good to know! I could republish it with less noise on that part! Thanks for your help.